My partner Ariana and I finally finished with our new script and we also wrote our final outline for our film opening!!! In our story outline, we included a beginning scene of the murderer stalking the victim at school. This way, we can develop a story for why she wants to stalk her. We are trying to make a notion that the murderer is low key in love with the victim, and that is why she stalks her up to the woods scene. We are adding in a shot of the murderer stalking her at school, while looking at a picture of the victim and her boyfriend, with the boyfriend purposely scribbled out. This added scene makes it less confusing and makes it easier for the audience to know why the murderer is interested in the victim. We also crossed out some of the scenes on our story outline for our whole flashback idea. Each flashback that the victim was supposed to receive is now crossed out. This works fine because we can just skip over those scenes, and the overall video will still make sense. Down below is a picture of our new story line.
We also wrote our new script to our new story line. I'm glad we made the conversation between the victim and the murderer less awkward and more focused on the point that the murderer wants to get to know the victim better and lets her know she's been watching her at school. Down below is a picture of our new and improved script.
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